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郑志雄 124.236.112.181 2016/2/9 8:59:10 415 楼
情感真挚，祖国呀我亲爱的祖国这是那个时代最炙热的情感
毛大同 101.71.160.110 2014/11/23 13:39:04 414 楼
—— 祖国啊！

我是贫困
我是悲哀
我是你祖祖辈辈
痛苦的希望啊
是“飞天”袖间
千百年来未落到地面的花朵
（主啊------）原来现代诗与圣经相差无几。呵呵。
九皋山人 218.29.165.62 2013/6/19 9:23:34 413 楼
这是一杯浓烈的酒，让人沉醉！！
陈科 118.124.216.33 2011/10/31 19:17:42 412 楼
吐气如虹，情感海涛般汹涌！
华和烨 222.132.37.45 2011/7/22 22:43:30 411 楼
绝唱。
aicanwuqi 60.169.54.104 2010/10/7 18:55:07 410 楼
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aicanwuqi 60.169.54.104 2010/10/7 18:48:52 409 楼
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鹤舞风 125.39.171.229 2010/8/18 19:17:01 408 楼
真正而又伟大的诗人，一腔爱，浓浓的洒向祖国，无论她贫瘠与否。
望诗空 27.224.22.100 2010/7/12 22:45:48 407 楼
g7g5g6g6g3g7g8g8g2g 124.88.125.181 2010/6/17 22:52:44 406 楼
这款金额好看甲A警方LKAJ为了发掘其为恶LK啊啊啊我空间而哈卡万巨额坏人卡就我和客人会为客人居前的是凤凰卡机会塑料袋开发就阿里看见是法律课教案网络科技让两位客人经济和风格还是国家贷款条件和人家哈卡危机恶化人日哦丰厚的是他个人自己的分工合作的附加合同高科技啊和我饿哦条件十日谈急哦艾未进入下来到街头拉客为街头拉客为家人特拉尔看他就拉我看拉客为今日拉开绝望而阿尔及哈哈佛子奥斯卡积分你看见你在空间的非农温柔司机公关公司最怕热让破日统计饿哦搜诶软件公司二级公司机构为肉兔后爱恩时代科技管理是科技管理失控的就是了的疯狂攻击了深刻地方见过类似的人和狗阿瓦为人骄傲安慰安慰安慰让我而围绕围绕围绕围绕围绕围绕我让我愕然玩儿玩儿阿尔法十分投入黑色让他用身体哟上的发挥优势让他也很少聊天有机会上来看见他还是看到公司打工的分工私人家庭来说可如今他老是卡我看了觉得分公司领导人看见他脸色看人家提了控股非农死了看人家听说了客人特色让他听听老师可如今他是来客人今天来客人今天是洛克人见他了客人就听说了认可他就是了看人家是洛克人就是来客人就是了可如今他死了人今天是利润空间上来客人家庭来说可人家来让他看见色狼人见他脸色认可他就是了人口
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zhuzhu 125.119.15.56 2010/2/27 15:03:11 404 楼
好好，一定要支持
4321 125.87.40.251 2010/2/21 18:44:05 403 楼
嘿嘿嘿
4321 125.87.40.251 2010/2/21 18:37:03 402 楼
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很棒
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不错
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还好啦

不错。

顶一个咯！
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太有才了。
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太棒了，我喜欢这段。
我都给抄下来了
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看到这里,我就有些触景生情,当阅兵走过天安门的那一刻我不免有一些激动,作为一个中国人的骄傲真的那种心情真的不能表达,就算一个最坏的人当他看到自己的祖国有一些成就是他的能心是能被感染的
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此诗借鉴了前苏联诗人沃兹涅先斯基《戈雅》中的圆周句式“我是戈雅，……我是……”，但又有创造性的发展。圆周句式大多出现在抒发强烈情绪的作品中，悲伤痛苦的情调最宜用它来渲染。舒婷写的是“我”与祖国的关系，用这种句式，增加了痛苦和挚爱的深度。第一节是对祖国历史的反思，精心选取五组意象，象征祖国千百年来落后、贫穷、灾难深重的面貌：前四行平稳深长，富有音响和色彩，给人以深思沉重之感；五、六行则短促，不事描绘；后三行又伸长，行短意紧，显示出情感的起伏，出现主词。第二节承上启下，揭示出蕴藏在中华民族灵魂中的希望之花从未消亡过，灾难虽重，理想永存，只是暂未实现。此节先短句后长句，然后主词复现，似意犹未尽，一种深深的遗憾之情便泻于笔端。第三节倾吐希望，激情昂扬，连用五组意象描绘出处于历史转折期的祖国百废待举的面貌。每一个意象有自己独特的意义，五组连用形成博喻排比，强化了亢奋热烈的情绪，表达出诗人欢欣鼓舞的情怀。第四节头两行用“十亿分之一”与“九百六十万平方”构成小与大的对比，寓意“我”是祖国的一分子，但“我”的胸中又包容着整个祖国。接着以乳房养“我”与从“我的血肉之躯上去取得”又成一对照，突出“我”同祖国的血乳关系；甚至迷惘、深思、沸腾，与富饶、荣光、自由，也是性质相反的对衬，以见出痛苦和欢欣的无限。如果前三节是写“我”与祖国的关系，第四节则是反过来写祖国和“我”的关系。句法参差正是心情激动至极的表现，在对主词的双重呼唤中结束全篇，达到最高潮。

全诗无一字议论，皆以意象描绘，以情贯穿。所选意象既质朴又鲜明，既独特又贴切，每一个词也都与被描绘的景象紧密契合。抒情又非一览无余的倾泻，而很注意其波动的节奏，由悲哀、低沉到欣喜、高昂，又由亢奋到深沉，其中纠结着悲怆、忧患、炽烈，失望与希望，叹息与追求等多种复杂而凝重的感情，体现出诗人独有的委婉幽深、柔美隽永的抒情个性
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好棒
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87楼是谁，写这么多。
126在线阅读网 61.154.218.75 2009/9/30 18:37:45 343 楼
写得好感人啊。好，很好。
126在线阅读网 61.178.181.84 2009/9/30 13:26:12 342 楼
写的很好啊，我很喜欢
126在线阅读网 117.136.27.250 2009/9/29 21:46:01 341 楼
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哈哈好棒啊[M41
126在线阅读网 60.189.43.114 2009/9/29 20:26:13 338 楼
太好了
126在线阅读网 117.22.32.253 2009/9/29 20:00:05 337 楼
写的未免太好了
126在线阅读网 118.116.139.249 2009/9/29 17:52:20 336 楼
yyyyy 118.116.139.249 2009/9/29 17:46:54 335 楼
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126在线阅读网 222.208.149.121 2009/9/28 21:52:36 331 楼
不错
126在线阅读网 113.194.133.1 2009/9/28 20:11:34 330 楼
126在线阅读网 115.59.230.144 2009/9/28 19:22:50 329 楼
写的很好gOOd
126在线阅读网 121.22.232.197 2009/9/28 18:28:46 328 楼
126在线阅读网 60.176.34.140 2009/9/28 11:07:36 327 楼
此诗借鉴了前苏联诗人沃兹涅先斯基《戈雅》中的圆周句式“我是戈雅，……我是……”，但又有创造性的发展。圆周句式大多出现在抒发强烈情绪的作品中，悲伤痛苦的情调最宜用它来渲染。舒婷写的是“我”与祖国的关系，用这种句式，增加了痛苦和挚爱的深度。第一节是对祖国历史的反思，精心选取五组意象，象征祖国千百年来落后、贫穷、灾难深重的面貌：前四行平稳深长，富有音响和色彩，给人以深思沉重之感；五、六行则短促，不事描绘；后三行又伸长，行短意紧，显示出情感的起伏，出现主词。第二节承上启下，揭示出蕴藏在中华民族灵魂中的希望之花从未消亡过，灾难虽重，理想永存，只是暂未实现。此节先短句后长句，然后主词复现，似意犹未尽，一种深深的遗憾之情便泻于笔端。第三节倾吐希望，激情昂扬，连用五组意象描绘出处于历史转折期的祖国百废待举的面貌。每一个意象有自己独特的意义，五组连用形成博喻排比，强化了亢奋热烈的情绪，表达出诗人欢欣鼓舞的情怀。第四节头两行用“十亿分之一”与“九百六十万平方”构成小与大的对比，寓意“我”是祖国的一分子，但“我”的胸中又包容着整个祖国。接着以乳房养“我”与从“我的血肉之躯上去取得”又成一对照，突出“我”同祖国的血乳关系；甚至迷惘、深思、沸腾，与富饶、荣光、自由，也是性质相反的对衬，以见出痛苦和欢欣的无限。如果前三节是写“我”与祖国的关系，第四节则是反过来写祖国和“我”的关系。句法参差正是心情激动至极的表现，在对主词的双重呼唤中结束全篇，达到最高潮。

全诗无一字议论，皆以意象描绘，以情贯穿。所选意象既质朴又鲜明，既独特又贴切，每一个词也都与被描绘的景象紧密契合。抒情又非一览无余的倾泻，而很注意其波动的节奏，由悲哀、低沉到欣喜、高昂，又由亢奋到深沉，其中纠结着悲怆、忧患、炽烈，失望与希望，叹息与追求等多种复杂而凝重的感情，体现出诗人独有的委婉幽深、柔美隽永的抒情个性
126在线阅读网 117.90.216.84 2009/9/28 6:05:00 326 楼
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126在线阅读网 114.112.152.123 2009/9/27 20:14:45 325 楼
还好
122.225.55.49 2009/9/27 19:17:05 324 楼
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126在线阅读网 222.53.224.189 2009/9/27 18:48:14 322 楼
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